owl city- fireflies (griersondo remix)

[Mauro Ericsson]

heres a little remix im workin on
not my usual genre but what the hell
its wierd iv made it slower bt faster at the same time lol
have a listen u will know what i mean

[SOUNDCLOUD]http://soundcloud.com/ericgrierson/owl-city-fireflies-griersondo-remix[/SOUNDCLOUD]

new final version took on board all comments what ya think?
i love it
[SOUNDCLOUD]http://soundcloud.com/ericgrierson/griersondo-fireflies[/SOUNDCLOUD]

 

[Thr33]

Nice sequence. I think it might help break it up if ya took the bass out of the 5th bar where the fireflies synth starts, then maybe bring it back in 2 or 4 bars later with a progressive sweep with the big kick. As the vocals are slower maybe try adding some reverb and delay to the last 2 syllables to add some ambience, might give it a more busy feel.

 

[Mauro Ericsson]

cheers mate im on a mission.
i think there's something there
will work on it

 

[Thr33]

i definitely agree that you've got something worth finishing. u no me, i like defiance, big breaks and something that gives me ups, downs and great sequencing.

 

[olivetty]

I think this is an awesome remix. I know I'm supposed to give some critique, but I can't really come up with something that would make it better. Maybe like TopFloorDjs said, to add some ambiance to the vox, making it more magical in a way.

Keep on going!

 

[Mauro Ericsson]

final version up

 

[hendo]

i like this, i like the way the vocals have been slowed down, and i think they go well with what you've created there, i also like how you've re-created the lead to sound like the original song.

good stuff

 

[murphy341]

This is damn good man!