Houseish

[ThunderBass]

Know its short,,

How is the bassline and synth?

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[BBM]

Has a decent melody. However, there is a lot of work to be done. Pay special attention to the drum samples you use and try to have them sync with the style of song.

Pay even more attention to the quality of the synth. Lots of work could be done there.

Lastly, keep up the effort and you will continue to improve!