captainlead
Mega Producer
[SOUNDCLOUD]http://soundcloud.com/captain5/david-guetta-without-you[/SOUNDCLOUD]
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David Guetta - Without You (Captain5 Remix)
- Thread starter captainlead
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DylanVasey
Mega Producer
I think I'd prefer the instrumental better ha. The vocals are not gelling that well.
The actual production part of it though is great.
The actual production part of it though is great.
Mauro Ericsson
Mega Producer
I must agree the production quality is top notch but there's just somethiing that leaves it a bit empty for me.
Hmmm your grid is off... i think you must have (for reasons unknown) added an extra bar at the beginning. At your tempo, the first drop should break start at 1:00.
Personally i think you've tried adding too many different styles here. You've got the Major Lazer style kick sequence, LMFAO style dutch synth and then the trance/pop style at the first big lift.
If your going for that minimal breaks kick sequence then the dutch synth definitely wont work with it plus with the vocals over-lapping its too much. Have a listen to a R3hab remix and see how he differenciates his stems. Also maybe think about kicking in with the vocals at the 1:00 break instead of at 0.30 like a radio edit would, theres not enough going on for the vocals to fit well there.
I think the trance/pop style fits well, maybe think about that. Just some advice and feedback, hope it was helpful.
Personally i think you've tried adding too many different styles here. You've got the Major Lazer style kick sequence, LMFAO style dutch synth and then the trance/pop style at the first big lift.
If your going for that minimal breaks kick sequence then the dutch synth definitely wont work with it plus with the vocals over-lapping its too much. Have a listen to a R3hab remix and see how he differenciates his stems. Also maybe think about kicking in with the vocals at the 1:00 break instead of at 0.30 like a radio edit would, theres not enough going on for the vocals to fit well there.
I think the trance/pop style fits well, maybe think about that. Just some advice and feedback, hope it was helpful.